The Sunflowers' Day
They
stand at
attention,
facing the east
early in the day,
leaving morning behind
as the southern sun soars high,
yellow masks pursuing closely,
the platoon following their orders
with natural precision and guidance.

Midday falls away and the solar flight
continues westward, while synchronized
faces track the sun's path 'til dusk,
when shadows dim their purpose .
By daylight's sullen end,
the sun no longer
warrants blossoms'
attention
and blooms
rest.

Poem and Photo- Copyright © 2009 by Jack Huber-
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shakatoah   shakatoah wrote
on 7/31/2009 9:03:19 AM
I just love nature poetry like this...which we find so little of these days. Like Michelle, sunflowers are really special to me and always evoke happiness. Your work is beautifully crafted and much appreciated.

Michele   Michele wrote
on 7/30/2009 1:36:57 PM
Cool! I love sunflowers....I have just the one giant this year--had my front yard filled with them last year(view my photos). Lovely poem--as usual!

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