Will you remember me?
Your tiny nose,and little feet
Everytime you smiled,my heart skipped a beat
Those glistening eyes,and that perfect smile
I'll always remember you,will you remember me?

Not born of my womb, but in my soul my love for you cuts deep,
the first time you cried,the first time you laughed
All I wanted to know... is will you remember me?

I had given up on life,threw in the towel
And there you came,oh the hope of a child
Your small hands held up next to mine,
My little bundle of hope and great blue skys,
Lying in my arms close as could be,
My little angel will you remember me?

Still Smiling, Minnisha

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Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 2/21/2009 8:24:15 PM
A wonderful touching piece of writing my friend. So soft and gentle.. I can see the tiny hands and I can feel the love in the piece..well done.

penname   penname wrote
on 2/21/2009 5:18:25 PM
these are the days we live for...those kind, special moments. fictitious or not, glad you shared this moment with the world. - wide web. wonderful writing.

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