A broken heart

Hid behind the willows of leafless trees,

 

She attempts to escape the pain and frustration that has overtaken her life,

 

Trapped in confusion she stops to breathe and thinks to herself,

 

“I should have known when I said I love you…and heard nothing in return”,

 

“I should have listened to my intuition when it rendered that you’d leave helpless and

 

burned”, but instead she let her heart lead her into devastation and pain

 

And the only thing her eyes can see on her window, are streaming drops of rain,

 

“I know I’ll get past this, the hurt won’t always last, but I’m not sure how many more

 

Times I can travel this path”.

 

Minnisha

 


Comments:
 
kt6550   kt6550 wrote
on 2/19/2009 8:25:59 PM
I think quite a few times, if needs be.

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 2/19/2009 7:47:19 AM
This is filled with lots of emotion and the voice in the piece speaks with much pain. Well done.

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