A LOVE THAT IS PURE AND TRUE
 

A LOVE THAT IS PURE AND TRUE

Another day has passed and I haven’t seen your smiling face

Now I know why everything is going at such a slow pace

You are not here and everything is as dreary as can be

And for me, it’s hell, sheer misery

I didn’t know that longing for someone could be so poignant

But now I’m sure that you’re the one that I want

When I’m home, I can’t help but to think of you

And it makes me sad when I don’t know what to do

Most of my days are lonely and blue

And it’s even more so when I can’t see you

For some reason, when I see you, my spirit soars

And I don’t feel as lonely and as terrible as I did before

I have special thoughts of you every day

And my wish is that you feel the same way

If I had you in my arms, I’d be as happy as can be

Please tell me how to win your love for me

I feel something very special for you

And I know it’s a love that is pure and true


Comments:
 
danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 5/6/2008 5:38:29 AM
Beautiful and heartfelt.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/5/2008 11:45:02 PM
Good one. Liked how you told your story and rhymed it.

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 5/5/2008 7:45:16 PM
Very sweet! Good rhyme scheme.

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A man expressing the way he feels to a woman he admires greatly.
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