BUT WHY?
What happen to that dream,
It can't be apart from me.
But why?
What happen to that thinking,
It can't think that much negative.
 But why?What happen to that emotions,
It can't die so soon,so soon.
But why?
What happen to that feeling,
No time was when I don't feel happy.
But why?
What happen to that relationship,
It can't be so weak.
But why?
What happen to me,
I was not like i am
But why?

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KLHpensil   KLHpensil wrote
on 5/20/2010 3:10:16 PM
I like the idea of it. I would definitely like to see this poem published. It could use a little editing. It seems there are grammar mistakes, unless of course you did that on purpose.

Elton4562   Elton4562 wrote
on 5/20/2010 5:20:19 AM
I'm not capable of critically evaluating poetry, but want to say that I like this one. Thought provoking. Good work! Elton

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I was learning my subject when this poem came in my mind. A little is about me but not the whole o read this and tell me what is it like
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