what does it feels like
what does it feels like,
to be all alone,
to think about the wonders,
 that are long since gone,
to marvel at the beauty,
of the world around you,
to look at a shooting star,
hoping your wish come true,
to know who you are,
to know your worth,
to gaze at the wonders,
 of the beautiful earth,
anything is possible ,
if youve got enough nerve ,
 you areyou and always will be ,
 this is about the best thing you deserve.

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eragon   eragon wrote
on 5/20/2010 3:56:03 AM
It is a good writing. It made me remember all the past memories,good,very good or worst.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 4/2/2010 3:55:49 AM
You made me think of the things past that we as humanity has lost. Then to look at the simple beauty around and above us. I like also how you end this for there are great wonders inside all of us as well.

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