Love and snow
Love can be like the snow.
It's wonderful and fun at first,
But then it becomes cold
And starts to hurt.
You want to get away from it;
The stinging pain that is going through your body is unbearable.
The sun then comes out and melts it all away.
You watch it disappear into the ground,
Knowing it won't come back.
The love is gone for good.

Comments:
 
lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 2/15/2009 10:31:37 AM
Great analogy. Very deep.

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Love can be like the snow
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