Til Death
I wake up wit her next me…smilin and kisses me
I say hey I missed u…but im gld ur awake as I kiss her again…and again
We go and have some fun but then it turned to tragedy
She died n a accident rite there n my arms had tears fall down
I told her Im sorry this happen I felt my heart break I felt I couldn’t go on
I sat at him cryin I lay down hopin I died 2
My heart is beatin 2 damn fast 4 me to catch up
I lie there thinkin bout u how much u made me smile how ill never say I luv…u
I rather die then be here witout…u

I said I luv u I said I miss u I said I will always be here
I wish I could I see u kiss u hold u but ur not here
Til death…I will always luv u
Til death…I hope ill be there soon to see u smile…once again

I wokeup it was all a dream ur layin there next to me
I get up and say hello I luv u baby Ill be rite bk
I walk out side to see tha sun out I see tha kids plyin around
I smile at them then it turned to tragedy
I was on tha ground holdin my heart
I cant catch my breath thins r goin dark
U turn on tha tv to watch it on tha news
U cant believe its me u try to fine me
U stand there n tears hopin I wouldn’t leave u
I told u don’t worry baby I’m not leavin u…then

U said u luved me u said u missed and ur be there 4ever
U wish u could see kiss me hold me but now im gone
Til death…u will always luv me
Til death…u cant live witout me and we will be 2gether…again




 

Comments:
 
BlueIris   BlueIris wrote
on 7/9/2008 10:40:23 PM
Touching. I liked it. But if the man just walked outside, why did the woman watch him on the news, instead of going outside and finding him? At the end, is that supposed to say, "Til death...I u"?

Angeleyez   Angeleyez wrote
on 7/9/2008 9:53:58 PM
deep.....i wish i could get inside your head....id be at home there

RaymondSpringer   RaymondSpringer wrote
on 7/9/2008 8:31:47 PM
Sweet. Sounds like a Pearl Jam song.

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