Invisible
U hear a name echo down tha hall
Windows shatter crack break when u walk past
U cant see ur reflection anymore ur a ghost
Ur luv walked away ur heart walked wit her
Tha sound of death filled tha air
U walked by ppl but they don’t notice
U yell fuck u but no-1 noticed
A car crashed n front of u u went rite throught it
Ur invisible to tha world now
Tha dark looks 4 u tha world cracks
Tha dead walk tha moon falls
Tha seas turn black then blood
U walk alone u die alone tha world dies wit u
But u close ur eyes hopin its only a dream
But fire burns n ur eyes ur heart dies
U’ve become invisible to tha world again
U’ve fallen again not standin anymore
Tha world spins around throwin u down
Now no-1 can hear u but tha dead can see u
Ur world is over now nowhere to go
So u stay invisible die n tha cold
U feel free now…but not ur soul
Its locked away invisible to u as u were to tha world


 

Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 7/9/2008 1:05:46 AM
You nailed the ghost thing down. Nice job!

Angeleyez   Angeleyez wrote
on 7/8/2008 7:46:29 PM
I feel that way often....you pinned that kind of feeling to a t...:) I absolutly love it ...have i ever told you ur the best partner in crime ever?

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