The Empty Place
It's the place in the pit of your stomach that is 'telling' you that something is just not right.  It is that empty feeling gnawing at you, screaming to be heard and you just keep pushing it down, ignoring the warning.  A warning it is.  The alarms are going off like crazy inside you, but still you quiet them.  That place where they want to take you is just too terrifying right now.  Maybe in the near future you will heed the warning, but for now it's status quo. 

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Sojourner   Sojourner wrote
on 5/14/2008 10:41:07 AM
Wow, I know exactly what you are talking about. As a matter of fact I have felt this way before. Before you know it, what you KNEW was gonna, happens and you ask yourself, "Why did I ignore that feeling?"

amberfire   amberfire wrote
on 5/12/2008 7:48:46 PM
Now that was just creepy ... good ... but creepy. I like it, makes me scared of myself. ;-)

Wundrmom44   Wundrmom44 wrote
on 5/12/2008 1:12:57 PM
Sometimes you need status quo just to get through the day. I have spent many days that way. Make sure you grab the extinguisher before silencing all the alarms. Remember there are different types... depends on the fire that's burning. I'll be thinking about you Dani... Kristina

Mike Firesmith   Mike Firesmith wrote
on 5/12/2008 4:45:16 AM
I'm glad I didn't read this before going to bed last night.

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