WE ALL MAKE MISTAKES A Poem by ROSALIND
Deep deep deep down down down my spirit falls into a gloomy pit my heart is rotting rotting my flesh is weak and their is no other word for it my mouth is so foul so sick you have no idea the trouble I may have caused please look and see I wish I could take it all back in a sheer moment of anger an impulsive outburst maybe if I'd kept calm perhaps prayed and rested in the fathers presence is it to late now perhaps to say that am so sorry please forgive me for we all make some Hastie mistakes © 2012 ROSALIND

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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/14/2012 3:45:12 AM
Again, the wisdom of One Voice shines through. He is right for we all make them and to learn from our mistakes and to try to not make them again and again. Remember also that life is change and from birth to death, we are always changing.

OneVoice   OneVoice wrote
on 5/6/2012 10:32:31 PM
Mistakes...yes. That's exactly what they are - mistakes. You're well aware of 'forgiveness'. Its power carries more weight than blame... and is what is soo graciously extended us. It's more important a man's heart/desire be 'right' w/God than his feeble attempts/actions @ perfection that fall short - and fail. Striving for perfection is a 'science' and demonstrates one's desire to do/be/live righteously. Continue and be well... it generally gets better w/practice Ros'

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" TO MANY CHANGES........I just flipped !!!!!!!!!! Monday morning the blues hit me in the face again.. their has been so many changes in our family lately my spirit was so sad
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