I NEED TIME
 

you treat me ok
you've given me everything
but you don't spend some time
you know and that just aint right
when I call you the phone
you say you busy and you see me when you get home
you get here and you barely speak
and then you kiss me and you go to sleep
all I really want is your time
these other things I'm not satisfied oh




buying me things is not what I need
I need sombody around that can be there for me
you know holding me loving me sharing feelings and giving me time


guess what I can find somebody else if you can't give me your time
baby you are so good to me but you don't give me enough time
if you want to be with me you have to give me your time
baby I want time with you



so what do you say
so do you wanna try to work things out with me
I really wanna be with you
I just need some more one on one time with you
so will you give me that time
cause if not I got somebody else in mind
I really dont mean to be rude
I just really wanna spend time with you cause


buying me things is not what I need
I need sombody around that can be there for me
you know holding me and loving me sharing feelings and giving me time

guess what I can find sombody else if you can't give me your time
baby you are so good to me but you don't give me your time
so if you want to stay with me you have to give me your time
baby I want time with you

Comments:
 
shakatoah   shakatoah wrote
on 10/31/2008 9:40:38 PM
Oh honey, there's raw pain here...that I can relate to so well. It sounds just like the refrain in my own head, actually. I have to wonder how many women feel exactly the same as you and me...I've heard the same thing, year in and year out - and I'm not a spring chicken. There's been a lot of years I've heard this story of pain. Gentlemen...step up and be accountable...women are hurting. Thanks for baring your soul. Cheers, Mel

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