That glance I stole from afar...
Can't say as if i know your name
or even that I know who you are.

But all the same,
that glance I stole from afar,

that peek at your cleavage;
the sweat glistering on your skin,

like a banana to a monkey,
grabbed me, and pulled me in.
 

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Raven Spirit   Raven Spirit wrote
on 4/27/2008 11:55:20 PM
Very clever ... I enjoyed this.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 4/23/2008 6:16:58 PM
I like this. Short and honest. And whimsical.

Sojourner   Sojourner wrote
on 4/23/2008 3:51:49 PM
Wow, this is an amazing effective and straight to the point poem. I like it!!!

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 4/23/2008 2:16:23 PM
Very cute.

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