intro poem for the whittler
the people were made they were carved fom wood
with their little details not to be ecxluded
the baker baked, and the keeper kept
the last one laughed, and the bearer wept
and with every tear, in every doubt
a small flame crept
until it wiped the village out

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Linda   Linda wrote
on 9/27/2009 3:08:22 AM
Its really awesome. It very patiently moves along but with strong effect

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this is the intro poem to a short story ia m writing called the whittler
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