You Best Be Prepared
  

You Best Be Prepared

 

 

Out of the air came a voice without a face

In tones as dry and level as the place

 

Where by an alter that should have been

They looked upon quite another scene

 

Many times man lives and dies

In the earth and between the skies

 

That of race and that of soul

Prepare to meet what must unfold

 

The unremembered God they now must see

When at last returned to eternity

 

Unwilling still to bow down on that knee

Complete submission is what it should be

 

But oh no, not obstinate, stubborn, magnificent man

No matter the cost - defiant man must stand until

 

Placed with love and mercy inside Gods hands

Only then does man begin to understand

 

Side by side their faces blurred

Recognizable defiance seems now absurd

 

Filled with pity shaking with grief and fright

Crying like great babies both day and night

 

So that we in coming days may be aware that

When you go to meet your creator you best to be prepared!

 


Comments:
 
lanaia74   lanaia74 wrote
on 5/24/2008 4:40:01 AM
WOW! You left me speechless here! Superb!

Cre8tive_One   Cre8tive_One wrote
on 5/23/2008 8:29:42 AM
Truly outstanding work. You are amazingly blessed. May God continue to give you the strength to inspire and bless others.

lanaia74   lanaia74 wrote
on 5/20/2008 7:18:53 AM
Meeting the creator!You know according to the Maya that will be December 21st, 2012. Food for thought! Be pepared, in our world today that's the understatement of the year, Your poem stirs the emotion, which is good! Superbly done!

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/19/2008 12:05:26 AM
Good warning to be heeded. We all will answer one day.

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