Why Can't We Just Understand?
  

 

PEOPLE OF EARTH

 

 

People, people, people,
Why is it that you cannot understand

That when God created the earth
He already had the master plan

For all the peoples of the world

To help each other, to share with the other,
With total compatibility

To enjoy, to procreate, to love one another

In complete & utter harmony!

What does a man gain when
He abhors his very own brother?

When he covets his neighbor,
And has no qualms about

Killing his own mother

Why does man want for himself
All the riches of the world?

When with his undeniable intelligence
Has he not learned - that

With nothing he came here with
And with nothing he’ll return!

 


Comments:
 
Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 12/10/2008 8:38:53 AM
Another poem filled with fire from you my dear friend.

lanaia74   lanaia74 wrote
on 6/5/2008 7:39:36 AM
Brilliant work! Very very effective! Exceptionally done!

prettyflower1_73   prettyflower1_73 wrote
on 6/4/2008 12:11:34 PM
Nice. I like the whole message if man's greed. I like how you say that God already has the master plan, and from that men should think about more important things than materialistic things that don't mean as much.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 6/3/2008 10:49:43 PM
Great insights! We both know that one day Earth will return to what it was intended for. This poem needs to be beamed across the planet so all can see.

auba   auba wrote
on 5/30/2008 8:50:52 PM
awesome words awesome poem awesome meaning awesome depth top writing here

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