Liquid Fire - My Desire
  

 

Liquid Fire

 

Sweet day, so cool, so calm, so bright

Your love I anticipate tonight with much delight

 

Soft speech, smooth touch, the warmth of your body

More radiant than summer’s sunbeams are you to me

 

Rouse my sacred womanhood with fire and flame

Throughout the night whilst I scream your name

 

My strong man, my loving man, my man whom I adore

Fulfill my deepest desires - give me more, more, more…..

 

Oh sweet incendiary show me thy art

Upon this gracious body and inside my heart

 

That thirsts of love with brim-filled bowls of fierce desire

That by mornings light I’ll have drained every drop of your liquid fire!


Comments:
 
Jazzcat   Jazzcat wrote
on 9/7/2008 9:16:30 PM
Beautifully conceived and well-written with such an honest passion and a sincerity that makes the reader feel it all from beginning to end. Great stuff!

Oblivion297   Oblivion297 wrote
on 8/27/2008 8:04:51 AM
Great writing, just the right amount of erotica to express both craving and emotion

Tony   Tony wrote
on 6/6/2008 7:49:44 AM
Very cool, could not have said it better myself

lanaia74   lanaia74 wrote
on 6/1/2008 7:56:16 AM
This is so cool! Your descriptions in this were marvelous! I could feel the love you were conveying here! I wish I could write poetry as well as you do! Just AWESOME! No more words needed!

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/31/2008 1:59:03 AM
Wonderfully expressed! Eroticism can be tastefully done and you proved it. I could feel the emotions "dripping" off the screen. What a lucky man he is!!!

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Just a little something...something for my husband, whom I love with all my fiber!
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