Astronomical Journeys
  

Astronomical Journeys

 

 

 

Each night, I prepare for bed

But I do not sleep

Instead I go on a journey

 

I go to places that seem parallel to where I am now

It's as if I am out side of myself

Looking at myself

 

In my sleep, I travel to places where I have never been

Doing things that I have never done

Yet it is my-self that I see

 

I am involved with people

That I have never met

But it is as if I know them well

 

I am involved in situations that

I could never conceive

But it is as if I planned them

 

I see marvelous wonders

That I dare not explain

For my journeys are astronomical!

 

When finally I return to my bed and awaken from my sleep

I realize that I have had an exhaustive experience

That is as special as it is unique!

 

 

 

 


Comments:
 
Lee   Lee wrote
on 4/12/2013 4:49:50 AM
Beautiful homage to the great mystery of lucid dreaming. Enjoyed it very much thank you.

Wordcrafter   Wordcrafter wrote
on 2/14/2009 10:27:48 AM
Wonderful to journey in ones' dreams, further than anyonw could ever imagine, never cease to dream . Lovely poem.

penname   penname wrote
on 1/25/2009 8:48:44 AM
and jimisvu, i think probably should not have had thost blue and red rugby shirt fredrick kreuger pajamas- that might have helped you with those pesky dreams.

penname   penname wrote
on 1/25/2009 8:47:01 AM
oh oh awesome. this seems like a different sort of writing for you. i love this. i wanted it to be longer, but the length you chose is perfect. point made, and a lovely journey it took me on reading this in wonderment. i travelled there with you as the reader. wonderful. now i need to view my "dreams" more like this, than exhausting adventures that fill me with anxiety, not wonderment and beautiful adventure. great writing- i feel your stepping from your box with this. stretching your creative muscles. i know its all personal preference what we write about, and I used to only write about one sort of thing- kinda poe historical slightly macabre stuff- kinda like vincent price and ebenezer scrooge writing by candlelight merged- but now i find myself writing about all sorts of things- comdey, scifi, political, drama, etc.- You warrior p- can write about anything and be really really great at it. i just know. thanks so much for sharing this. it has affected me and how i may view my own dreams

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