BIRDS

 


BIRDS

BY: WAN

As times passed by

And as the days goes by

People come by and say hi

And after many years they say goodbye

 

Like the roses with thorns

Like the animals with horns

Like the ocean that waves

And blowing its breeze

 

I am lucky to have you my friends

Giving me inspiration to live my life’s trends

I am thankful for the smiles

And laughter that you put in my life

 

You are the birds

That scattered the seeds

On this chocolate earth

And nourishes the land with

You’re kindness and love

 

 

“I dedicate this poem to all my friends here in this website

Even if you’re one of my friends in my room or notJ

I want to thank you all for reading my poem, correcting,

Criticizing, commenting and rating my writings.

I called you Birds that scattered the seeds from the fruits

From the trees because you are helping me grow and excelJ

Once again, Thank you from deep inside my heart.

 

 

 

 


Comments:
 
SpideyMan1962   SpideyMan1962 wrote
on 8/28/2009 12:16:03 PM
Beautiful! Absolutely brilliant!

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