AN EMPTY GLASS

An empty glass

By: WAN

 

Like an empty glass

Lying on grass

Waiting for someone

Who will cover it from the sun,

Longing for the sky

to cry

 

Like an empty glass

I long for the water

To fill up my life with trust

For now, I feel my life is over

Losing my only child

And the man of my life

 

I regretted those times

When I’m still full with water

I stupidly spent my life

And thought will always find a clover

But now that I lost my treasures

That I just took for granted, now, can’t find any cure

 

My life is like an empty glass

Longing for my treasures’ touch

How can I make the clouds cry for me?

For just one minute, cry with me

And now my life is over

I cannot find any clover

 

 


Comments:
 
WAN   WAN wrote
on 7/3/2009 7:58:56 PM
thank you miss France:)

fran48   fran48 wrote
on 7/3/2009 1:33:20 PM
I love how you compare your life to an empty glass.Beautiful imagery and metaphors.Another grat poem!

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