Violet Seasons


My name is Violet, I am a flyer of the seasons
In fall I am a artist with lemon in my hair and sapphire between my toes
In Winter I am a haunting night owl in a haze of silver
In Spring I'm a zesty school girl with ladders in my stockings and thoughts of algebra far from my mind
In Summer I'm a placid French teacher that sometimes guilty enjoys chocolate and tabloids
I am a twister, turner, acrobat

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WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/20/2009 8:05:41 PM
in the last line I am a twister, turner , acrobat-why dont you do it like this i am a twister,turner and an acrobat:) so people can read it flawlessly. Anyway, its just a suggestion sweetie if you don't like to change it its really up to you. Have a nice day there!

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/20/2009 10:32:04 AM
i think its cute. In the second line, I think you missed the letter"n" :in fall I am a artist-it would be nicer if its :in fall I am an artist. I think this poem needs a change:)

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