Evidence
Verse I
I see a man
He has it all
But he's so blind
I watch him fall

Onto the ground
Among the ashes
And bitter tears
They soak his lashes

They run down
To some secret place
Leaving trails
Across his face

Chorus
They say you never know
Just what you have
Till you lose it
Looking at this man
He's the evidence
To prove it
........................
(Wait that's me)

Verse II

I hear a heart
Hungry for love
To tired to sleep
Eyes cast above

i see the pain
filling his eyes
He calls her name
with regretful sighs

Chorus

Comments:
 
CJTweet   CJTweet wrote
on 4/13/2010 2:12:42 PM
This is a very thought out poem! I like it! Is it supposed to be a song? Because I can also see that it would be a very in depth song!!

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