Stay?

Will you stay?

If rain falling from a blackened sky is a sign,

in the storm, ill take your hand, will you take mine?

if what we so dearly wanted was so, so, far out of reach,

i'd still run to it, will you run with me?

if there was nothing left to have, but still so much to endure,

of you i would still be sure, will you stay strong and be my cure,

if it all crashed to the bottom, what once sat on top,

i would still believe that you'd never, will you ever stop?

if the sun was ever to come back aroud to show the light of day,

the night has ended i've spoken what i need to say, the struggle is,

my last question, will you stay


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CKeoki   CKeoki wrote
on 2/10/2009 8:58:44 PM
i like it...i also like the title "don't beg"...and im not making fun, my highschool click used to use those two words religiously and they just so happened to come to mind when reading Stay?...good job though, real good... ChristopherK

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