Its Been A While, and Im Probablly Rusty
I've cared myself into a coma,
driven this thing to its limits,
i cant feel the pain anymore,
but, i miss it,
you're the world to me,
how can i just shut you out,
i guess its for the best,
it's the only way to keep me sane,
but if living with out even a thought of you is what it takes,
i'd rather crack up, go insane,
you're my oxygen,
i need to breathe,
but you're image is out of my head,
will i suffocate?

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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 4/6/2009 2:27:31 AM
Another good one. The emotion here speaks for the poem. Some say the pain of love is the easiest emotion to write about for it cuts the deepest.

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It is only with the heart that one see's rightly; What's essential is invisible to the eye.
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