Don't Laugh At Me



Don,t laugh at me
I'm just like you
I laugh, I cry, I fall in love to
Yes, there is a problem that goes with this name
It was something I was born with 
I'm not to blame
Please don't laugh it hurts me so
Each harmful word is like a nuclear blow
Don't look on the outside
Rather see the person within
So we may become the best of friends


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Moqui_Takoda   Moqui_Takoda wrote
on 6/5/2008 6:36:23 PM
hey, good work. I remember all that stuff. The kid who used to bully me and slap me around in front of the girls, like he was my big brother, or something, who, incidentally, I got even with by hiding his pet guinea pig for a couple of days ... i fed it really well. It did hurt and even today, I think it would be nice to go find the one with the red hair and the fast hands, but he died a few years back and somebody asked me if I knew he always admired me, but just wanted me to stand up for myself. Sometimes they are just showing off. I don't think they mean to hurt you. But they do, yes?

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/8/2008 12:19:27 AM
Well done. Should be given to all bullys and taunters.

vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 5/7/2008 10:44:24 AM
Kids have a unique monopoly on cruelty & you painted the picture 180 degrees.

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Response to all those mean SHITS in highshcool.
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