Breadwinner
  

HAIKU

 

Breadwinner

 

 

 

Embracing her love

She gives unconditionally

Tough heart enclosure

 

 

Hospitality fair

Mum is cooking up a storm

Aromatic air

 

 

Eyes awashed with tears

Mother tongue sparkles in ear

Laughter around hear

 

 

 

By Suzette Lindsay

 


Comments:
 
Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 8/28/2008 11:54:20 AM
Wonderful!

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 8/25/2008 10:03:49 PM
Great haiku!

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Synopsis
This came about from a task to describe a person that means a lot to oneself, I choose my mum. After writing a couple of pages we were told to edit it to form a Haiku. Impossible at first but found the words to describe what my mum means to me, and the family net work. This lady keeps us all in check.
Published Date
3/8/2008 12:00:00 AM
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A book called Lyrics of Life
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