Friends Will Be Friends

Panel1. Henry and John are walking together in the green area of a university campus.

HENRY
I can't believe how many people are dropping out of school

JOHN
Why?

Panel 2. They keep walking. Henry's waving hello at someone out of panel while John looks in the other direction, probably at a girl he finds attractive, or reading the cafeteria menu.

HENRY
Can you imagine anyone wanting to make their life harder by not acquiring the necessary knowledge to find a decent job?

JOHN
Not to mention telling your parents their money was all wasted.

HENRY
I know!

Panel 3. John pats Henry on the back. Henry looks a little ashamed, but not so much. More than anything, he's surprised at this news:

JOHN
Listen man, I gotta go drop out of school so I can become a writer. I'll be back when I'm done.

HENRY
Oh...

Panel 4. Henry holds out his hand with the rock sign and shouts out to John,who's already out of panel.

HENRY
Bestest plan ever, man!

Bestest. Plan. Eva!


Comments:
 
Dorian_Gray   Dorian_Gray wrote
on 9/10/2011 7:41:31 PM
I like it. I loved the way you described the house and the interior and the people inside. I also like you choice of theme: character driven by curiosity decides to try something that she had always believed to be crazy or even wrong. It makes for an interesting tale. I hope you keep going. D. T. Gray

Thewissen   Thewissen wrote
on 2/17/2009 6:12:51 PM
scusmewat?

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This is the script for a strip from a web comic I hope to begin publishing soon. Tell me what you think of it! This will be the first strip and should give you a good idea of the direction the comic will take.
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