urinary catalyst
it breaks the air, a simultaneous braking of

moments generally unsuspended, yet when paused

reveal rapturous sounds, the audible splendor.

reverberating waves ascend the pipe internal.

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Starlingpoet   Starlingpoet wrote
on 7/14/2009 3:18:30 AM
I have never seen someone take such an unfavorable subject and make it sound poetic. Congrats!

Ve   Ve wrote
on 7/7/2009 5:02:23 AM
I don't think anyone will dare comment lad. You have a strange way of making things sound nice if that makes any sense

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