this, more often than not, includes me.
What then, defines doctrine, if not "divine" division.
Individuals amalgamate, discovering opinions.
Suffice to say succinctness is a suitable solution.
The kin of the Creator plagues the progress with pollution.

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frederic   frederic wrote
on 4/2/2009 5:33:23 PM
You have obviously thought about theology and philosophy. First of all, given that context and the brevity of this poem, you need to be accurate. It is. Good point. Of course, understanding poetry, I am wanting to see more development. The language you employ here creates expectation. You have a good start for a much longer piece. Keep goin'. Frederic

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