many weddings
And all the filth that's wanted will be hidden from the sponge.
That claims the skin its virgin with cleansing consummation.
Interceding liquids cast a mold about our bodies.
Never holding fast to limbs it kisses with submergence.

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Starlingpoet   Starlingpoet wrote
on 7/14/2009 3:32:55 AM
I think this is probably my favorite of all of your poems that I have read so far. I like your writing it makes me have to think, it isn't just written clearly to spell everything out plainly. Cryptic, but not so much that you can't understand what is going on, or at least what the reader wants to believe that it means. Thank you.

Stephen M
Poetry
Ballad
writing Stephen M
Doesn't write as much as he should.
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