fathoms, leagues
the dichotomy is useless without two sides explored.

treacherous passage; the chasms caverns, depths and daunting

crevices concealing what inability and fear

define as trite, sans application of exegesis.

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Starlingpoet   Starlingpoet wrote
on 7/14/2009 3:22:37 AM
The alliteration used in this poem is done very well. It is not over done but just right. Cheers!

Ve   Ve wrote
on 7/7/2009 5:00:11 AM
Far to articulate for me laddie ;) ha ha Very good. Its not a long poem unlike some and it doesn't have that depression in it like some. It does however have an incredible weight to it with only four lines, it is using a different style to the others I've read so good for you, keep it your own and keep up the good work. Frederik might like it too.

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