when you were eight


Will be re-posted ASAP thanks.


©Jaydean Wszolek 2006

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djc   djc wrote
on 3/21/2011 11:29:11 PM
I love this poem..it reminds me of that magical place....childhood! Well done, Starling!!!!

amusedeplume   amusedeplume wrote
on 8/30/2009 8:06:39 PM
Childhood innocents, being comfortable in who we are even while "waiting for that [blessed] ice cream truck and dripping "on the kitchen floor." I stand firm in the belief that there is one for each of us whom we can be that kid over and again, knowing in our heart that somehow, when we were eight, we were bound together.

Jan   Jan wrote
on 8/20/2009 8:06:06 PM
sad..reminds me of overseas workers who left their children to work..a very nice poem indeed..thanks for the read..

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 8/20/2009 5:43:47 PM
This write touches me deeply.. I love this because I can feel and touch the words jumping off at me..well done.

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