living your life in tune
a solo voice that whispers and purrs
stirring my emotions
i gaze reflectively at the ocean
enjoying a bare-naked midnight swim
i spot a weariness in your eyes
grasping at the complexity of your thoughts
respecting your vulnerability
an ordinary man
living your life in tune.

© Jaydean Wszolek 2007

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Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 6/13/2009 8:00:46 PM
Living your life in tune....wells aid line..the entire piece is done very well..good writing.

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 6/13/2009 6:12:09 PM
Very well done. It is very deep.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 6/2/2009 12:21:39 AM
So simply written yet says so much. Again I say, it is poems like these which are genius because of their simplicity.

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