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i picked up your guitar

saturday afternoon

i walked in and you were sleeping.

my audience of one,

making no sound

i paused, hands shaking.

just to see how it feels,

i picked up your guitar.

i have everything i need,

a hunger for applause

and a will to believe.

someone guiding my hands

i played your unfinished tune,

living my dreams for a moment

when I picked up your guitar.

Comments:

		OneVoice wrote on 7/13/2014 7:23:11 PM
		Secret treasures lived within 'stilled moments' courting our 'private silence' are ones remembered. Beautifully captured

		faithful_poet wrote on 2/27/2010 10:21:32 AM
		That's beautiful! "Living my dreams for a moment"--yes!

		StarPoet wrote on 12/9/2009 3:02:32 AM
		Nice and imaginative piece here. I can see the guitar and your playing it.

		Warriorprincess55 wrote on 6/2/2009 6:30:36 AM
		A very beautiful, meaningful and heartfelt piece of work you have here. Great job!

		WAN wrote on 6/2/2009 4:11:06 AM
		wow this a very nice poem. Emotional...:)

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Published Date

5/31/2007 12:00:00 AM