Unplanned Moment
We lose ourselves
in a barefoot dance,
alone in an unplanned moment
we merge as one.

Within a wordless language
our lonely tongues meet,
frozen emotions flood
down a long winding path.


©Jaydean Wszolek 2007

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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/21/2009 3:42:36 AM
Sometimes its moments like these that are the most exciting of all for they are unexpected yet so enjoyable. I like the touch you gave it here.

amusedeplume   amusedeplume wrote
on 8/29/2009 11:18:50 PM
My words fail to express the profound effect yours have made on my heart. I thought I was alone in your poetic expression of this life experience. "Within a wordless language...." Gracious sakes, I am practically left breathless with this one.

Jan   Jan wrote
on 8/20/2009 11:49:58 PM
a sweet touching poem..it has a gentle tone with it and i really like the idea..really lovely!

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 8/20/2009 5:47:27 PM
I hope the journey was good and the ride was pleasurable because I sure enjoyed the ride....I am fan of your work..well done.

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