Replanting

Sylvia lines up flower pots
for replanting       tidies
clutter on the bench     while
James sits on a boulder
in the garden      He loves to
watch her work       he rolls up
his sleeves and sits in the deep shade.
Sylvia approaches with the pots
passes a mound of leaves      notices
an apple core tossed onto the pile
a treat left for the squirrels.
James studies her   she has an ordinary face
pleasurable to him     familiar.
Wearing a sleeveless summer dress
with dainty buttons down the front
she looks clean and cool
the dress covers her generous curves
As she gets closer     he smells the scent
of soap on her skin.
He gets up      adjusts his hat so the wind
won't catch it       puts his hands in his pockets
leans over        kisses her cheek.
With both hands she touches his face  
feels his skin     so smooth from his shave
she loves his style     hair parted to the side
polished boots     pressed trousers
his father's pocket watch safely tucked away
just a glint of the chain       flashes in the sun.
They talk     while they plant flowers together
a tradition       every year on the prairie farm.
Many wild flowers have already spread
bright reds and purples      like berries
soft yellows and oranges      like peaches.
James pulls the hose over to the spot just planted
he sprays a fine mist     Sylvia by his side.


© Jaydean Krupski  2008

Comments:
 
Starlingpoet   Starlingpoet wrote
on 8/29/2012 2:08:14 AM
Thank you for such a great compliment!! Conflicted : ) I appreciate everyone that has taken the time to read and comment on my poetry!! Conflicted, Andrew and Thomas.

Conflicteddreamer   Conflicteddreamer wrote
on 8/28/2012 8:38:01 PM
This reminds me of Ray Bradbury. Really nice.

AndrewThompson   AndrewThompson wrote
on 4/15/2012 10:11:19 PM
A very intimate view of a couple at work. I love the fruit and the colours.

Thomas_UK   Thomas_UK wrote
on 2/18/2012 4:40:21 AM
I love the way you capture poignant moments in lives and manage to convey the richness of being present in them. You've also got a great way of using the senses to really bring the reader into the world. Thank you for sharing this!

Starlingpoet
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I am the current President of the Saskatchewan Poetry Society.



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