TO GIVE TO YOU

If I could. . . .


I would take the petals from a rose so red
The tint of the ocean, so deep and blue
A ray from the sun, bright and yellow
Wrap them all in my love, and give it to you


I would gather the colors from the elusive rainbow
Some drops of moisture, from the morning dew
The pleasant sounds of a soft summer rain
Bundle them with my love, and give it to you


I would take a beam from the full moon so bright
The glow from a thousand stars, born anew
A tender moment or two, from space and time
Group them with so much love, and give it to you


The devotion of lovebirds, snuggled so close
The passion of two lovers, alone together
Honor, respect, adoration in our hearts so true
We could give all these things to each other, forever.


Comments:
 
realmwriter   realmwriter wrote
on 11/26/2014 9:24:03 AM
Dude, this is pretty good man. You don't need lessons from me. You got style all your own, that ladies would no doubt swoon over.

Rhiannon   Rhiannon wrote
on 4/27/2011 4:35:35 AM
It is a beautiful poem filled with a love that shines so bright and wanting it to last forever

candyland87   candyland87 wrote
on 4/24/2011 12:31:56 PM
This would make for some great wedding vowels. :)

riverdove   riverdove wrote
on 4/20/2011 10:17:04 PM
This is a lovely poem indeed...:)

candyland87   candyland87 wrote
on 3/29/2011 1:14:38 PM
I liked this a lot!!!

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I wanted to take some of the most beautiful things in life and nature and make them into a love poem. Hopefully I did just that?
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