THE MAN THAT YOU DESERVE



He is a fortunate man
That has your world in the palm of his hands
If he can but understand
That it's going to take everything he can


To be that special one
To give his all and then some
To make sure to you, total right is done
To make your heart shine in the sun


From the deepest, darkest part of the night
To the highest point of daylight
When your day shines so bright
He must try with all his might


To show you how much he cares
And he will always be there
Whether the going is good or fair
And to find such a man, is truly rare


For the road your heart has taken has been rocky and long
And has had more than it's fair share of wrongs
Now your heart sings the sad song
Of how the two of you did not get along


Little by little from the start
Then piece by piece he broke your heart
And slowly but surely you two drifted apart
And from your life now he must depart


For you to now be free
From that which wasn't meant to be
And as for now you clearly can see
That the man you deserve was not he


To my words please do heed
The man that you need
Will come forth with dashing speed
With truth&respect in word, thought, and deed


To forget his own and help you with your pain
That in your heart may still remain
And any further hurt to you he will refrain
For he looks upon this with such disdain


He must reach into his own heart's reserve
For it's your love he is trying to preserve
And when you find this man to your heart he will serve
Is truly the man that you deserve


Comments:
 
Rhiannon   Rhiannon wrote
on 4/27/2011 4:56:49 AM
WOW!!!! Talk about timing, This was just what I needed to hear Thank you for your gift of words :)

DiamondNDaRuff   DiamondNDaRuff wrote
on 12/23/2009 8:31:13 AM
Great poem. Thank you for suggesting I give it a read. It really spoke volumes to me.

Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 12/22/2009 9:08:24 PM
Excellent! I am glad I saw your note to read it!

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 12/22/2008 5:58:44 PM
Another wonderful write. Unfortunately a lot of women wouldn't know a good man if he came and sat in her lap, washed her feet, brought flowers, while pontificating his love for her..ya dig?

tigercatracing   tigercatracing wrote
on 12/9/2008 1:06:51 PM
:) Thank you, I think you did a wonderful job here. Very well done especially from a man's pov!!

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This poem goes out to all those who have had their hearts broke by the wrong love. But I want to tell them that there is out there, the man that you deserve.
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