THE BODY REMEMBERS
  
As I sit here and think about you.....


My eyes remember when I looked at you
They light up like two stars in the night do


My breath gets short as I gaze in awe
At the beautiful and lovely woman you are


My hands want to reach out to caress your cheek
My ears can't wait to hear you speak


Oh how I yearn to run my fingers through your hair
Gently, tenderly, and with loving care


My arms want to be around you entwined
As our two bodies become as one combined


My lips long to be touching yours
As they meet, my pulse starts to soar


And as love turns into ecstasy
I realize I am now living my fantasy


Now desire takes over as we move together
God, how I wish this could last forever


And as we take each other to wonderful heights of pleasure
My mind remembers why it's you I treasure


And as passion explodes into flames of a white hot hue
My heart remembers how much I love you


Comments:
 
Pulelehua   Pulelehua wrote
on 6/11/2008 1:29:36 AM
So much passion in your words. I agree with vwhitlock, I can hear them whispered. Yet I read the title of this piece and realize there are no whispers needed; quite simply two becoming one has all the passionate whispers needed. Beautiful, sensual ... oh how I love that word! Thank you!

vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 5/22/2008 8:19:38 AM
When I read the words, I hear them whispered...you are very talented!

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/18/2008 11:22:50 PM
I thank you all for your comments. I am glad that you enjoyed this poem.

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 5/17/2008 10:38:59 PM
This is a beautiful piece of poetry.

lanaia74   lanaia74 wrote
on 5/17/2008 6:45:07 AM
What a beautiful write! Exceptioally done!

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When you are alone and you think about your loved one, sometimes THOSE thoughts come up!
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