THE ANIMALS OF LOVE

What are the animals that I can compare your love to?

 

 AN ELEPHANT for how large your love is in my life.

 

 A GIRAFFE for how tall your love makes me feel.

 

 A LION for your love makes me feel like a king.

 

 A CAT for all the mysterious qualities your love is to me.

 

 A PIG for I want to HOG as much as I can of your love.

 

 A PORCUPINE for at times you can be sharp but I never forget

 how soft you are underneath.

 

 A PEACOCK for how loving you makes my heart strut with pride

 and wonder.

 

 A CHAMELEON for the changing nature of your love, which excites me.

 

 A RHINO to charge&break through any obstacles to your love.

 

 AN EAGLE the king of the air, your love makes my heart soar.

 

 A DOVE for the peace loving you brings to my heart.

 

 A SWAN reminds me of how beautiful&graceful you are to me.

 

 AN OTTER for the fun times we have together.

 

 A DOLPHIN for the playful qualities of your love.

                    

                        And most importantly...

 

 A MAN to love you always, like a true man should.


Comments:
 
Rhiannon   Rhiannon wrote
on 5/1/2012 10:27:46 PM
Its adorable and playful :) I always enjoy reading your poems :)

ailil   ailil wrote
on 7/11/2009 2:16:26 AM
Just checkin this out after the comment.. It is neat how you are using animals to symbolize the expressions of love here...

WAN   WAN wrote
on 5/18/2009 10:43:18 AM
Nice job! I like the dove and the chameleon.

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 5/11/2009 5:51:54 AM
This is great..love the comparison throughout...the dolphins especially caught my attention.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 3/26/2009 3:04:47 AM
Thank you Kerrie and Anya but I must say that it's just me and the two cats for now.Maybe one day.....

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I was watching my two cats G-Rock and Asia goofin' off one day and the thought came to me to write a poem about how I can compare the animal kingdom to the love of a woman. As strange as it may sound, I think this poem did just that. I know it is me being a goofball, but I think if you follow the poem you can figure out what I am trying to say in the end.
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