COMPARISON
 
As I gaze at the rose in the early morning sun
I think of her, my one and only true love
 
 
As the morning sunbeams tenderly caresses the rose
Reflecting its deep scarlet hue
My mind is joyfully alive
With warm glowing thoughts of her


 For is not a rose
Nature's revealed image of a woman's heart
With each petal tenderly placed
And ever so delicately layered
Nestled ever so snugly
And encircled in a wondrous natural bosom


And her loving heart, like the glorious rose
In the splendid morning sun
Is an imaginative comparison
To heaven itself


The rose, her heart
When both are touched with love
One is truly blessed


Comments:
 
Agiftabilitys   Agiftabilitys wrote
on 12/21/2009 5:48:01 PM
Wow! Really beautiful!

GlennMcCrary   GlennMcCrary wrote
on 7/28/2009 4:35:06 PM
Thank you Starpoet I appreciate your kind words. :)

Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 7/12/2009 6:34:47 AM
Wow, you've certainly touched MY heart with this. It's very nice, beautiful... has she read it? Because you certainly honor her well.

Kartel   Kartel wrote
on 7/11/2009 8:38:44 PM
beautiful , i love so smooth very good comparison

Roxanna   Roxanna wrote
on 2/28/2009 5:52:05 PM
lovely, the imagery gives such a sensual feeling!! very much enjoyed reading it!!

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I took a rose and compared it to the heart of a woman. This is the result of that thinking.
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