BEAUTIFUL MUSIC, BEAUTIFUL LOVE (THE AFTERGLOW)
  

 In the light of a sunny afternoon....

 

Soft music plays as we are off work today

Romance calls as clothes fall

Lips meet as hearts skip beats

Bodies touch, pulses rush

Making love starts and we both do our parts

Passion unfolds, ecstasy explodes

Climaxes are peaked and strength becomes weak

 

Holding you close after the love we made

Enjoying the feeling of the passion we obeyed

 

Basking in the glow of something so beautiful

This for us was much more than physical

 

Mental, Emotional, Spiritual it was all of these combined

The ultimate expression of our love, this moment in time

 

Strength is spent as we lay gasping for air

As I now stroke your lovely hair

 

Beautiful music plays in the background

Helps to calm the body rush down

 

Entwined around each other, feeling our hearts beat

Enjoying the afterglow that makes this love complete

 

And as that warmth covers us like a slow moving fire

Puts the finishing touch to our desires

 

The music, the love, and an afterglow so fine

We eagerly look forward to the next time


Comments:
 
Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 10/26/2008 5:50:03 AM
Ed, you are a straight up playa, my brotha! I mean, what more can be said! Your words are always so beautiful and meaningful.

OneVoice   OneVoice wrote
on 10/8/2008 10:49:33 AM
Beautiful imagery... reminding me of tender moments - Very nice

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 9/17/2008 3:15:43 AM
I thank you all for your praise on this "glowing" poem. And may all your "loves" feel the same as this poem!

vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 9/16/2008 3:29:14 PM
And as that warmth covers us like a slow moving fire - GREAT LINE! You never cease to amaze me with your insightfulness and descriptions!

PatBertram   PatBertram wrote
on 9/15/2008 7:39:31 PM
Fire and passion, but tenderness too. Well done!

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Synopsis
After making love one afternoon and catching my breath, the title to this poem came to me. (Remember I said that inspiration can come at any time, any place!!!) So I wanted to tell the world about my feelings on that lovely afternoon.
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