APPLE PIE LOVE
  

Making chili with you, one late afternoon

As the radio plays smooth jazz tunes

 

Laughing, joking, teasing, just having fun

Knowing in my heart that you are the one

 

The one I want to love, forevermore

The one I want to forever adore

 

" Honey, please put the pie in the oven

And then come over here and give me some lovin' "

 

Into the refrigerator rushes I

And I take out an apple pie

 

Out of the box and into the stove so fast

And turn it on to start the heat blast

 

I then turn to you and see that look in your eye

No words need to be spoken for we both know why

 

In the middle of the kitchen we start to kiss

Suddenly the phone rings..." WHO IS THIS??? "

 

A friend  with a problem crashes the mood

Thirty minutes later, the house smells of food

 

And as the smell of the pie fills the house

I playfully try to take off your blouse

 

You whisper " Wait till' I get off the phone "

So sexy you are, I just can't leave you alone

 

Finally you finish the interrupting call

And we waste no more time, as clothes now fall

 

We follow the clothes down to the floor

As the fire of desire now turns to a roar

 

The house smells of apple pie so sweet

Passion adds something new to this exciting treat

 

The aroma of the pie hot and baking

Adds something new to the love we are making

 

And as ecstasies have reached their highest peak

We lay on the floor, for strength is now weak

 

Catching our breath on the floor of the kitchen

This was fantastic...magical...truly bewitching

 

Then the timer on the stove starts to buzz

Bringing us out of our apple pie love.


Comments:
 
Moqui_Takoda   Moqui_Takoda wrote
on 7/27/2008 11:36:55 AM
ok, star, here's the deal ... when yer playin smooth jazz, and i know why people play smooth jazz ... oh, yeah, its cool and nice and relaxing but it is also romantic and very very inspiring and can make even a dolt like me very imaginative, so i can imagine how clever you can be .. anyhow OO! ... okay, you've got this music goin' and baking ... uhuh, got it, and youre involved also, yes yes yes ... and the phone rings and she answers it ... alrighteeee! ahem, and then she talks on it for a long time and then she hangs up and starts to finish whatever it was she was doing before you took her attention away from these things and then then ... you actually pull this whole thing off ... wow ... this is very fun .... how did you do that? you are a most impressive writer i must say. bravo!!! oO)))

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 7/24/2008 11:33:20 PM
Thank you all for the comments. And thank you for catching my mistake BlueIris. And Penname, I love ice cream and barbecues. You may have just inspired my next poem!!!

BlueIris   BlueIris wrote
on 7/24/2008 9:48:27 PM
You were right in your synopsis; it made me smile. One thing--you said "out the pie in the oven", instead of "put".

jlew1973   jlew1973 wrote
on 7/24/2008 1:42:13 PM
I LOVE IT! So much fun. Playful. Sexy. You captured the essence of romantic love during everyday activities. Bravo!

poetrydances   poetrydances wrote
on 7/24/2008 6:57:11 AM
Full of fun and great use of rhyme- can see this as a song too- nice one.

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This is one of those goofy little poems that may leave a smile on your face. While cooking dinner in the kitchen one day, me and a girlfriend got a little frisky, and…well… just read on and find out.
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