I'm Loosing All Doubt...
Breathing me in,
Breathing me out,
Filled from within, 
I'm loosing all doubt.

Pushing me forward,
What's this about?
You bring me clarity,
I'm loosing all doubt.

Spending my time with you,
"I'm in love," I shout,
You're beginning to heal me,
I'm loosing all doubt.

Your mercy encompassing,
I can't define the amount,
I want to wrap myself in you,
I'm loosing all doubt.

Love so personified,
Love that is loud,
I fully embrace it,
I'm loosing all doubt.



Comments:
 
Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 1/20/2009 6:15:57 PM
I agree with all of the above! Excellently written!

G_Money   G_Money wrote
on 1/20/2009 9:54:09 AM
:) This would make a good worship song

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 1/12/2009 10:10:32 AM
Reminds me of the journey with God. How with each step closer to Him we lose our doubt just a little more. Excellently expressed.

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 12/28/2008 3:10:44 PM
Love the erasing of doubt in this piece. The assurance of love will do that. Great Job!

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Do you have love like this in your life?
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