I Just Want To Go Home
Glass scatters
My mind wanders
Confusion ensues
Terror invades.

Picture goes black
Pain is numbing
I don't know where I am
"God help me!"

Heart pounding
Time slows down
Flash frames
I can't put words together.

No movement
Too much movement
Unable to stand
Unable to lay down.

I'm not okay
I hope I am okay
I'm terrified
Will life be the same?

I pray for peace,
I pray for safety,
"God protect me..."
I just want to go home.



Comments:
 
Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 1/20/2009 6:06:27 PM
I too, am glad that you all are alright. Your poem is an excellent description of what you went through. God always keeps his arms wrapped safely around His children. May he continue to bless you & your loved ones.

G_Money   G_Money wrote
on 1/20/2009 9:50:21 AM
Wow! I'm glad everything is alright!!! I think you captured the racing explosion of thoughts very well. ~G

bookserpent   bookserpent wrote
on 1/18/2009 4:37:32 PM
I had a facetious comment in hand until I happened to see your synopsis. I hope everything is going okay. J

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 1/12/2009 10:07:40 AM
I like it. I feel the terror and the pleading and the confusion.

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