A Sea Of Robots
See them standing tAll,
So proud and yet So fake,
Endlessly dEbating,
Asleep and yet awAke.
See them standing prOud,
Not even aware oF their own plight,
Confused and in reveRse,
Obligated to have nO sight.
Pre-programmed to oBserve,
Pre-prOgrammed to critique,
Totally enThralled with themselves,
Another robot in the Sea.

Comments:
 
khill   khill wrote
on 2/6/2009 1:16:25 PM
I really get this. Well put.

SapphireCat   SapphireCat wrote
on 2/1/2009 7:30:56 PM
This is really random, but for some reason this reminded me of a bed of seaweed, each plant exactly the same (maybe it was the word 'sea', I don't know). Either way, great job. I liked this a lot.

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Synopsis
I rather like this poem, it's short and to the point, and I understand what I am trying to say and feel I communicated it quite well. You tell me if I did. Basically the poem is about how we are all trying to be unique, but in doing that we all end up being exactly the same. We all get programmed by the system into thinking and saying what they want us to think and say. We value other's opinions so much, we don't even try to be ourselves.
A Word from the Writer
This is a very different acrostic, see if you can find the acrostic and read it. I rather like how this poem turned out. This was actually inspired by e.e. cummings.
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