Shadow Of Satan (Part IV)
Step into my world,
what do you think I see?
This darkness fills the void,
the fire only enhances.
Look deep into my eyes,
tell me that you love me,
I can only hope it's true.
Your god is mocking me,
but i feel no offense.
take inside this life I give,
I will show you everything.
Baby, this is all from me,
the darkness is not so bad.
take my hard, if you're scared.
It's only just our fantasy,
I will hold you close and tight
nothing will ever break you
as long as you are with me,
deep in this Shadow of Satan...

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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 7/1/2009 3:05:18 AM
I can see this as a song. A song of despair and anguish. But there is the love of her that brings hope in. Good job for I think you express the hope/love in a totally different way. Creative!

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SoS I-III where a few metal songs I wrote in high school, nothing too fitting to the alias I use. Therefore I wrote this in a more poetic form to broaden the image.
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