Wrath of Night

Chaos of water,

Spitting with rage,

Winds roaring like a

Trapped beast in a cage.

Torrent of howling,

Screaming cold air.

Thunderous droplets

Filled with despair.

A horrific crack

Erupts all through space,

Ten million canons,

Sounding in place.

Worn and aged trees

Groan deeply and shake,

Shuddering with terror

They tremble and quake.

Black murderous clouds

Churn as they storm,

Swirling dark masses

Of intimidating form.

Uncontrolled force,

Earth’s raving child,

Beautiful and glorious,

Ferociously wild. 


Comments:
 
Conflicteddreamer   Conflicteddreamer wrote
on 10/28/2012 10:06:32 PM
Very nice. I like the line about space.

Lacuna Eidolon   Lacuna Eidolon wrote
on 1/14/2009 4:29:18 PM
You do have a way words! You seem to have a knack for using powerful words to convey your thoughts/images. That's a very cool thing.

G_Money   G_Money wrote
on 1/7/2009 3:41:57 PM
I love the last 4 lines. Very very well described.

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A poem about a violent storm I witnessed
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