Inside my mind
Inside my mind i wonder if I did right
Not wanting to let myself drift off into the night
Can only wonder how things will turn out

Night turns to day and I imagine
Daydreams keep me draped with compassion
Waiting to wake up from a shout

Hold on to what have in my mind
Keep it with me for all time
My own thoughts are mine

Now the clock strikes half past ten
Still looking for the door looking for my in
Wishing I had found it before darkness at nine

Inside my mind I wonder if I did right
Not wanting to let myself drift off intoInside my the night

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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 4/5/2009 4:50:29 AM
I admire your courage for looking into your mind and asking questions like this. Many don't want to or are afraid to for fear of what they may find out. I encourage you to look for that which is good for you and for humanity in your mind. And to show those things to the world.

Ryan
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Never back down because i am never afraid of failing.
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