Explode
Heart is beating

This moment is fleating

It all goes by to fast


Excitement rises

Passions fry

Will this last


Temperature changes

mood rearanges

Hot to the touch


firey veins

Im going insane

This could be to much


Pure and right

good for tonight

Let our bodies sync


Strong and Fast 

A passion that lasts

Never cut the link


Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 6/25/2009 12:05:30 AM
This poem takes me several places. My running 400 meter repeats, anticipation, and of course, sex. Good job that you can make the reader think in several ways.

Ryan
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writing Ryan
Never back down because i am never afraid of failing.
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